A Glimpse of Who You Are; A Glimpse of Who Your Character Is

What Your Surroundings Say

When someone walks into your house, what’s the first thing that visitor can assume about you? Probably a number of things. From the pictures on the wall, to the choice of furniture, to the prominence (or lack thereof) of a television, to the colors incorporated, to the amount of clutter, to the presence of pets, and even to the temperature within your home, all tell a story about you and who you are.

Pretend for a moment that you are a visitor coming to your home for the very first time. Take a few minutes and create a paragraph or two of Be A Novelistwhat that visitor might derive about you from what is seen.

My Friends’ Surroundings

I have a friend who loves handwork – knitting, crocheting, needlepoint – you name it, she loves it. If you step into her home, she nearly always has to move a basket filled with yarn and patterns from any available sitting space. A grand array of neatly framed needlepoint graces her walls.

Another acquaintance of mine home schools their three children. What was formerly the formal dining room is their classroom. Signs of school are apparent all around the house. Clutter is not a top concern for this mother.

Then there’s my friend who loves to hunt and fish. The first hint is the mud-splattered pickup in the driveway. No one uses the front door in this house. Everyone is funneled in through the side door and into the kitchen where something yummy is always cooking. Fishing rods lean all askew  against the wall on the porch. The hunting dog has to be nudged from the doorway before you can enter.

Your Character’s Surroundings

Be A NovelistYou’re getting the picture loud and clear. When creating your character(s) you can do the same thing with various settings. As an exercise imagine the intimate surroundings of your character. It could be an office, a backyard, a single room, a closet, or even a prison cell. Now write several paragraphs of detailed description. As you create this setting include enough characteristic things so your reader can accurately visualize that individual.

As you write let your mind move past the obvious. Look for details of success or lack of success. What about social status? Or habits? What of the details determine (or demonstrate) emotions, personality, intelligence, and outlook on life?

Stretch Creative Muscles

Such exercises work to stretch the muscles of your imagination. Such exercises challenge you to move beyond the obvious. (Good novelists cannot afford to continually dwell in the land of the obvious.)

What an imaginative method in which to move your character(s) into even deeper dimensions. Try this exercise and see where it leads you.

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A Stellar Style Study

Be A NovelistOkay, after you stop laughing – or gritting your teeth – over the alliteration in the title, I want to give you a way to study your own style. It’s relatively easy and yet it can be quite effective.

Select an Author; Select a Published Novel

What author in your genre (the genre of your present novel-in-progress) do you most admire? The one you read the most?  There may be more than one and that’s even better.

Once you have selected your admired author, now grab one of his (her?) novels.  Next randomly choose a page from the novel and make a photocopy of that page. It can be selected from anywhere in the novel.

Next print out a manuscript page from your novel-in-progress. This should be after the novel is well underway. At least close to the final draft form.

You will need colored pens, or highlighters, or markers.  Grab your favorite beverage, move away from the computer, and get comfy.

Keep in mind this is not a condemnation study. This is a style study. This is a method by which you can begin to ascertain your own style of writing.

Time to begin the study.

Step 1: Check out sentence structure. Be A Novelist

Are the sentences in your manuscript made up of a variation of simple, complex, and compound structure? Or are they all the same? Are the sentences top heavy with many participial phrases? (Looking up, he could see the starry sky… Reaching the shore, they jumped out of the boat…)

Now look for sentence variations in the writing of your admired author. How do they compare with yours?

Step 2: Sentence length

Count out ten consecutive sentences in your manuscript. Make a list of how many words in each sentence. Are they all the same? Or a nice mix of short and long? Add the numbers in your list and divide by ten. Now you know the average word length that you tend to write in your sentences.

Do the same with the writing of your admired author. What is this writer’s average length? How varied are the sentence lengths in this novel?

Step 3: Modifiers

Use a highlighter and highlight adjectives and adverbs used within a 100-word section of your manuscript. Now add them up. If you marked eight, then you have an 8% use of modifiers in your writing.

Now it’s time to check out the modifiers that your admired author uses. Is that writer’s percentage higher or lower than yours?

Step 4: Enunciation

We’ve looked at sentence length, now what about word length? Again work with a set of 100 words. How many words in that section of your manuscript exceed two syllables? What about three? More? Make a list.

Again, study the selected page from the novel and do the same. Take a section of 100 words and make a list of how many two- and three-syllable words (longer?) you find. Now compare.

Step 5: Last step – Verbs

Search the page of your manuscript for verbs. Count the strong verbs such as jumped, hit, turned, slammed, etc. Next count weak forms of “to be” verbs.  (am, is, are, was, were, be, being, been, do, does, did, has, have, had, can, may, might, must, will, shall, would, should, could)

How does your admired author handle such verbs? How does the count of strong verbs in the novel compare to the count in your manuscript page?

Your Style

There you have it — five steps that can help you as your develop your style. Keep in mind that when it comes to writing style, your style is Be A NovelistYOUR style. It’s neither right nor wrong. However, as you are developing your own style, you can still search for poor writing habits that make for a weak, indistinctive style.

By following patterns of comparison studies as I described above, you are presented with an excellent (stellar?) way to:

    • Study your own style
    • Improve your style
    • Edit and revise
    • Self-educate

Put this task on your to do list right away!

Be A Novelist

Second Title in the Norma Jean Lutz Classic Collection

Tiger Beetle at Kendallwood

Available on Amazon Kindle

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